“Romanian Flame.” by General-J

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5300 miles, there lies a warm flame.

Gracious curves all around, by far the prettiest Doamna flame yet.

It expands beyond her boundaries, blazing high towards the sky setting her foundation.

The burning passion in the heat of the moment, the connection between two places never been tighter.

Her touch cures the wound of pain, leading to her exotic voice of healing.

Diana, the Romanian Flame.

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2 thoughts on ““Romanian Flame.” by General-J

  1. I love the ending “Her touch cures the wound of pain, leading to her exotic voice of healing.”  I can imagine Diana having a silky touch almost soothing along with a voice that causes shivers to run up and down your spine.  A voice that causes healing by being in a conversation with her.  I imagine a candlelit room with a flame gingerly dancing with it’s shadow bouncing in the corner.  Masterfully done!  I enjoyed the 19 seconds to read this and the 57 seconds to listen to it read out loud.  Bravo!

    Jay

  2. Wow, thousands of words captured In a 19 seconds prom. This is really nice and very aesthetic poem, I enjoyed reading through and I love the romantic atmosphere depicted. My best part is “Her touch cures the wound of pain, leading to her exotic voice of healing”, I think it talks of her comforting touch and voice that gives peace and joy. In my opinion, this is really interesting, I love it. 

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